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Cake day: July 10th, 2023

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  • My take on the article

    • If it was written by AI, the author should have done a manual pass to simplify it and make it more approachable
    • If it was not written by AI, the author should probably have asked AI to review for readability

    Either way, the article was done in such a way that it is hard to read. It also misses

    • Why should I care about this?
    • Why does this matter?

    At least those things were missing early on in the article. I scanned through it, but the article did not seem to take into account explaining why one should spend cycles reading this.